definitely appreciate the feedback, I prefer the harsh stuff, it makes me look for whats wrong!
I agree, the first is a bit over processed, I had spent about 1 min per pic just to try to get her an array of examples. The theme would be for like an album cover or the inside jacket for a cd/poster of some sort.
The theme is open for now, shes looking for "vintage" which is very broad, so I figured if I took a variety of scenes for the first time around, we could start to narrow down what she was looking for
will get back with the 2nd shoot which is a little more focused
im happy with the quality of the pics though, really enjoying the two lenses I brought out for the shoot still...my children!