[hl0m4n]

objective: im seeking an internship to...

i need help on a great opening line for an internship position. use the sentice above or make one yourself. looking forward to seeing some thoughts and creative ideas , thanks guys.

[Year's_End]

...further your knowledge on whatever it is you're looking for? Besides listing your experience and qualifications, I'm pretty sure you're just gonna be writing something along that line in one form or another.

[ghosthi32]

find chelsea?

[Tondtar]

...to assist me with my drug addiction expenses."



Get you hired in no time ...100% guaranteed.

[JayKay335i]

...to fuck woman with real jobs?

[BTM]

FWIW there is no point in referring to yourself on your own resume. It's redundant. Additionally, your objective should not be to seek anything. It should be to obtain, establish, etc.

As for the rest of your sentence, you haven't posted enough info for anyone to genuinely help you

[Augenbrauezug]

Originally Posted by hl0m4n

objective: im seeking an internship to...

i need help on a great opening line for an internship position. use the sentice above or make one yourself. looking forward to seeing some thoughts and creative ideas , thanks guys.

Delete the first 5 words your starting with, don't assume that the person reading this is an idiot.

Edit, I'll start reading other responses before showing that I'm an idiot.... ^^^ BTM got it.

[newdadkel]

"learn how to kiss ass better."

This is the point of some internships

[hl0m4n]

at some responses. but in all seriousness, this sentence will either be on my resume or my cover letter. all i can think of is the most basic on the lines of "im seeking the internship to further my knowledge...".

the internship is for bmw na. the guy trying to get me in told me last week a spot finally opened and to submit my papers. hopefully i can get the part time open now or full time during the summer.

and jay wtf is up with your avatar of skinny

[newdadkel]

Good luck with that! Sounds like a cool job.
But what exactly is the position? This could help develop a much more specific objective than just wanting to learn more.

[JayKay335i]

Originally Posted by hl0m4n

at some responses. but in all seriousness, this sentence will either be on my resume or my cover letter. all i can think of is the most basic on the lines of "im seeking the internship to further my knowledge...".

the internship is for bmw na. the guy trying to get me in told me last week a spot finally opened and to submit my papers. hopefully i can get the part time open now or full time during the summer.

and jay wtf is up with your avatar of skinny

Just trying to pretty her up

[Year's_End]

Originally Posted by hl0m4n

at some responses. but in all seriousness, this sentence will either be on my resume or my cover letter. all i can think of is the most basic on the lines of "im seeking the internship to further my knowledge...".

the internship is for bmw na. the guy trying to get me in told me last week a spot finally opened and to submit my papers. hopefully i can get the part time open now or full time during the summer.

and jay wtf is up with your avatar of skinny

with what part of bmw? corporate? design? engineering? i MUST KNOW

[khaye1]

this how I started mine:

I am interested in acquiring a position with a progressive company which will enhance and challenge my... I enclosed my resume as a first step in exploring the possibilities of employment with your facility...

your cover letter is key, be sure it makes an impression.

[JayKay335i]

Throw some hot nudes on the cover. Everybody loves hot naked bitches.

edit: Maybe skinny will send you some n00dz for the job?

[radix]

... learn how to write a resume.

[BlackMoupe]

Come to a full understanding of the path you've (I've) chosen In order to fully prepare myself for my future independent career.

[chungdae]

Professional career resume's do not require an objective. Go back to school and take communication skills management, advanced communication management, and communication and writing skills.

[Augenbrauezug]

Originally Posted by Nikkahtropolis

with what part of bmw? corporate? design? engineering? i MUST KNOW

I wanna know too!

[aakrusen]

I'll give it a shot...

I'm seeking an internship to assist in acquiring the skills and experience I'll need to further my career. This internship will allow me to build on teamwork and networking that will be critical in as I grow with this company.

Don't be afraid to use Buzz words but be careful not to over user them and remember that who ever reads this will want to believe what you are saying.

[JayKay335i]

Originally Posted by aakrusen

I'll give it a shot...

I'm seeking an internship to assist in acquiring the skills and experience I'll need to further my career. This internship will allow me to build on teamwork and networking that will be critical in as I grow with this company.

Don't be afraid to use Buzz words but be careful not to over user them and remember that who ever reads this will want to believe what you are saying.

I would LOL if I read it.

If you are interning, you dont have a career, so you have nothing to further, so technically, your sentence no makeo senso.

[aakrusen]

Considering I now work for the company that I interned at, it does make sense.

[JayKay335i]

Originally Posted by aakrusen

Considering I now work for the company that I interned at, it does make sense.

Unless you are 20, never worked for a company before, dont yet have a career...

Moving from one paying job to a better paying job would be furthering ones career. Interning in an industry that you havent worked in would be more like getting a foot in the door.